The rolling clouds have
stopped
And, the winds continuous
whistle has silenced.
A girl of only 21 stands and
stares at the scene behind her
Even on this dreary day the
sounds of the last laugh
And the whispers of the last gossip
of hang in the air.
Two young women have cleverly set
shop.
The ephemeral scents of the rose
and lilies
Titillate the emotions of the
surrounding people.
In her billowing white dress the
woman stands motionless
As she observes those around
her
The past will never come back
And the future will never arrive
For the present is eternal
Her carefully carved neck holds
her head high
She wants to cry as she witnesses
the joy of another couple
The man has just returned from
war
His pride for his country is
shown on the uniform he still wears
He stands opposite his female
friend
Not too far; but close enough to
rekindle their feelings
And the lady in the white dress-
With her craned neck-
Watches, her fleeting intrusion
in the couple's private moment
Becomes permanent. A snapshot of
time.
Her yearning is apparent; Her
slightly turned hands,
And her slightly bowed face.
Her hat covers her eyes. Those
eyes-
That if one could see- would
reveal
All the secrets of this young
girl of 21
Her heart is empty only to be
filled
By the same man who will accept
her roses
But, when will he come?
Will he ever come?
Poor child, the thorns of the
roses
Will forever prick her heart
As she waits to greet her husband
Her head will always look back
Because, for her,
There is nothing to look forward to.
This is a beautiful interpretation of the painting. Your attention to every detail and every untold story is moving. "The past will never come back
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For the present is eternal" (Mahajan) was so insightful, so powerful, so moving, it almost made me cry. Almost.
Your whole poem is amazing and I especially like the last two lines. They contrast really well to the happiness of the other people and represent the painting as a whole. The words you use (including some so advanced I had to look up) also create a deep mood which made it really interesting to read.
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