Saturday, February 15, 2014

A Girl of Only 21









The rolling clouds have stopped 
And, the winds continuous whistle has silenced.
A girl of only 21 stands and stares at the scene behind her
Even on this dreary day the sounds of the last laugh
And the whispers of the last gossip of hang in the air.
Two young women have cleverly set shop.
The ephemeral scents of the rose and lilies
Titillate the emotions of the surrounding people.
In her billowing white dress the woman stands motionless
As she observes those around her 
The past will never come back
And the future will never arrive
For the present is eternal
Her carefully carved neck holds her head high
She wants to cry as she witnesses the joy of another couple
The man has just returned from war
His pride for his country is shown on the uniform he still wears
He stands opposite his female friend
Not too far; but close enough to rekindle their feelings
And the lady in the white dress-
With her craned neck-
Watches, her fleeting intrusion in the couple's private moment
Becomes permanent. A snapshot of time.
Her yearning is apparent; Her slightly turned hands,
And her slightly bowed face.
Her hat covers her eyes. Those eyes-
That if one could see- would reveal
All the secrets of this young girl of 21
Her heart is empty only to be filled
By the same man who will accept her roses
But, when will he come?
Will he ever come?
Poor child, the thorns of the roses
Will forever prick her heart
As she waits to greet her husband
Her head will always look back
Because, for her, 
There is nothing to look forward to.


2 comments:

  1. This is a beautiful interpretation of the painting. Your attention to every detail and every untold story is moving. "The past will never come back
    And the future will never arrive
    For the present is eternal" (Mahajan) was so insightful, so powerful, so moving, it almost made me cry. Almost.

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  2. Your whole poem is amazing and I especially like the last two lines. They contrast really well to the happiness of the other people and represent the painting as a whole. The words you use (including some so advanced I had to look up) also create a deep mood which made it really interesting to read.

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